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John winced on behalf of Sherlock as they approached the crime scene; the smell of rot was ripe throughout the lobby, the voices of several panicked guests echoed around the giant aquarium centerpiece where the body had been dumped, and the walls and carpet were covered in clashing textures which would make even a mute sick. John reached out to steady Sherlock's mind, though the well-controlled Sentinal hardly needed it. He was already focusing in on the relevant details and assessing the situation. John was swept up in his excitement for something new and interesting, but what exactly it was, John would have to wait and see.
The guests were beginning to stare at the two-man detective team instead of at the body now, their stress running higher at the sight of the sentinel amongst them. John threw his shields up around himself and Sherlock, willing the mutes to look away.
Surely enough, their gaze began to slide from one gaudy pattern to the other, eventually forgetting what they had been looking at in the first place. The detective and his precious Guide slid into obscurity, leaving them free to gather data without fear of interference.
I just finished reading through Chameleon, so I thought I'd try my hand at it today. Preview image is by Reapersun!
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YoshiKyubi Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait.. I donīt remember this scene up until chapter 14... and I canīt find the other chapters...

Where are they? I wanna go onr eading!!!!! Q_Q


Or is this story not finished and you wrote that? o.O
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floppybelly Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I have no idea what you're asking. Chameleon is written by Velvet-Mace, I just extrapolated on the universe she built with it. It's a fan-fiction of a fan-fiction.
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YoshiKyubi Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, ok...

I thought the text you wrote was an extract from a chapter.
Sorry. >.<
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OliveTheBreloom May 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to comment again, okay?
Okay.

I really like this ficlet, John and Sherlock's dynamic here is just wonderful, they make a wonderful duo in almost any form. (Be it detective and doctor, Empath and Sense-freak.... whatever)
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floppybelly May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I will never say no to more comments! :>
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OliveTheBreloom Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is actually a really nice chameleon-esque ficlet. :)
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floppybelly Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I hesitate to do any more before the story gets much further!
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OliveTheBreloom Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's updated recently.
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floppybelly Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Chapter 13? Yeah, I've read it, but I meant more of a finished state.
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OliveTheBreloom Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, yes.

Well- at least we can look forward to it- right?
(Personally, I'm hoping the Swatsonlock isn't graphic and they platonically bond instead)
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